No problem :PLooks good Just a couple of things, - Not sure there would be the need for 2 Mack Twist 'N' Shouts- We are looking for a really strong theme, I would like to see how this theme could be expanded, and an idea of the area, possible buildings etc- Also , this is a theme park, and I and the rest of the Merlin board ( ) would much prefer there to be theme music and not regular chart songs.As I keep drilling in, the focus is the detail, ride types, ride elements, main points throughout the rides, why you've chosen those rides etc etcAs much as you can possibly think of, let your minds run free, you have the oppurtunity to be our new Creative Designer !